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Leads - Embargoes - Urgents - Adds |
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Leads |
If we lead a story we should say
directly below the headline in an "Eds:" line what is new
in the story. A phrase such as "updates throughout" is insufficient. An Eds line is not essential with a roundup. The following examples show how headings
should look:
Currency-Stocks/ Frankfurt (dpa) - The euro was priced at 1.0164 dollars at the start of trading Monday ...
Currency-Stocks/ Frankfurt (dpa) - After an early gain, the euro fell back and was priced Monday at ...
Mideast-Palestinians/ Beirut (dpa) - More than 20,000 Palestinians demonstrated ...
Germany-Government/ Berlin (dpa) - The German parliament Thursday approved ... The desks sometimes combine complex subjects involving more than one roundup into a leadall. Leadalls carry no dateline. They are bylined: By Deutsche Presse-Agentur dpa.
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Embargoes |
Embargoes are noted in second
line of the header:
Britain-Amnesty/ London (dpa) - Amnesty International said Monday that human ...
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Features |
Apart from the timeless feature,
dpa also runs byliners categorized as NEWS FEATURE (two
words, not one), ANALYSIS, PROFILE, BACKGROUND, etc:
Kenya-Flamingoes/ Nairobi (dpa) - In the mud ...
Bosnia-Ceasefire/ Sarajevo (dpa) - The ceasefire signed Tuesday. ... |
Urgents |
As a rule, urgent stories should be
limited to one paragraph or two at the most. Additional
information can be filed in a brief second take. A more
detailed lead should follow as soon as possible. An urgent must go out as an "ee" priority.
Indonesia-Earthquake/ Jakarta (dpa) - People in the northern Sumatra town of ... The urgent line contains five bells. In PEN software the bells can be written with AltGr + G
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Adds |
We no longer normally run adds to
stories, but may do so if there is a minor addition to
available information within 60 minutes of a story having
been thoroughly rounded up, e.g.
Germany-Government/ Earlier in the day, lawmakers voted ... Sports results routinely run as adds through the day.
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Prompt
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Please remember to report on important
developments as they happen! Don't wait until the
end of the day to file your story!
An opening item on an important parliamentary debate followed by a lead or roundup is better than a single story late in the day. A brief item summing up the end of an important conference should be filed before getting down to writing a lengthy roundup. If a story needs to be updated with a lead it should always be wrapped up in a roundup. |
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